This week we finished up our Personal Narrative final drafts. As I edited my final, I began to think of other examples I was able to use. I even remembered one scenario that I completely forgot happened. Of course I added it into my narrative. I changed up a few things in my final that helped put it all together. I took the advice from my peers and incorporated them into my final. I fixed my grammar, I added more of my feelings, and I added more of my experiences. I think I could said job well done.

We also read a short story called “The Swimmer”. When reading the beginning, I was not as ingrained but towards the end it really caught my attention. I decided that the main character, Neddy, was childish, lively, and ignorant. It was definitely clear to see in the story. I feel like my discussion post was okay but looking back I could’ve added more things to say. But then again I prefer keeping things simple and straightforward.

This week was not as eventful. Though looking back none have really been all that eventful since it is the same routine everyday.

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